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"Arushi Ahuja"
Couldn't find the painter name! Tried Google :(

In the valley of sounds lies a music undefined,
Crude and momentous, in rhythms unrefined,
Of lyrics unspoken and never yet heard,
Vibrating in silence, the chords severed, 
Flaming with passion to rise and swell,
And dying altogether in the endless well,
Floating on wings of beautiful beasts,
And loosing control overwhelmed by the breeze,
And spiralling down ever so uncontrollably,
Fearing the abyss of discordant infinity,
And trying to reach out to the composer's soul,
Hoping hopelessly to be renewed and whole! 

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Also shared with MindLoveMisery's Fairytale Prompt!

27 comments:

  1. I like the thought of a hidden music waiting to spring forth... very nice..

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  2. it does have a fairytale feel. as for beautiful beasts, i consider wolves among them, and not vicious - unlike humans ~

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    1. Oh! Humans are all the evils that one can imagine... no one can deny that... and yet wolves are a beautiful yet ferocious beast!! thank you Grapeling!

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  3. Lovely Arushi with a great meaning and hope. Fairy tales are often about hope and you have captured it so very well.

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  4. The rhythm in this is song-like and I enjoy the way the image ties in. Well written!

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  5. This is divine Arushi and so melodious

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  6. This poem is the essence of a dream. I love the floating and spiraling....and its rhythm!

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  7. Such a beautifully free flowing poem, one of the best!

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  8. this is dreamy.... but in the end the hopelessness seems to take over. even music can't bring that much hope, it seems to say.

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    2. I think Marian that Music is hopeful... Its a blessing... But what with war and inhumanity can music really rise?

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  9. Such pretty thoughts, Arushi. I would still be trying to envision such a place (Garden of Eden?) but your lovely picture find gave me the "author's" place to dream and drool over.
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    1. Thank you Jim.. I never thought of the Garden of Eden! but yes maybe!! :)

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  10. Not hopeless. We were dreaming along the same line, hearing possibilities of the music of the spheres.

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    1. I hope not hopeless Susan! I hope one day a music vibrates that can kill all the sorrows of the world!

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  11. A lovely fairy poem ... with the right amount of enigma and still so free flowing!

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  12. "In the valley of sounds" I like that. Music carries us when we can't carry ourselves...Beautiful piece

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So much time I spent writing this... Leave me here the words on your lips!!